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“Neighborhood Park”

Yes those scribbled notes during that time made for some vivid descriptions:

“Ducks gabble and preen

green-jewel heads, blue wing bars”

“Lake smells,soggy squelch”

“Definition , Dancing”

Loved this poetic expansive definition!

Your concluding line says it all:

“His Grace. His grace.. Your grace.

An excellence granted by God"

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You're always one of my favorite readers, Looocinda!

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