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Cindy Angyal's avatar

“Magic” iis just that. I hope what happens next is more of YOUR MAGIC.

“Annoying Lovers”—“endlessly twitching”…”as if they enjoy display”…the ostentatious disregard of

all things not themselves”.

I remember reading your first one 12 years ago and this one is an additional bonus!

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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

I'm so lucky to have you for a reader, Looocinda! ❤️

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Jason McBride's avatar

I'm a big fan of drafting poems out in the wild! Right now, I'm working from a library. It has a lot of the same advantages of a cafe, lots of people not interested in talking to you, with the added bonus of book stacks you can wander when you need to pace around

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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Libraries rule! Short on coffee and bagels, however....

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Jason McBride's avatar

True. That is a major shortcoming

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shari young's avatar

An origin tale for the exclamation

“Get a room!”

Both very evocative of the cafe writing room!

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Weston Parker's avatar

Good stuff, I liked them both.

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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Thanks, Weston - I'm glad!

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Barbara Webb's avatar

café patios and coffee shops. So interesting, so comfortable and a wonderful place to get inspiration

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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

And a great place to hang out with friends, as well. As we know! :-)

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Marlena Maduro Baraf's avatar

Wonderful! Am now heading out to my patio table on a sunny afternoon with my notebook in hand. I expect we will fall in love again (and again).

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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Perfect spot for a lovers' meeting, Marlena. I'm thinking of you at the patio table.

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Rose Scarff's avatar

What you write is truly magic! I liked how both poems developed and I envy you the ability to write in such an atmosphere.

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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Thank you, Rose!

Some days a cafe atmosphere is more challenging than others, but when it's right, it's right.

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Terri Grayum's avatar

Wonderful poems, again. New word for me: ensorcelled. Love it.

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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Such a useful word! I'm glad you like the poems, Terri.

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