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Cindy Angyal's avatar

“Magic” iis just that. I hope what happens next is more of YOUR MAGIC.

“Annoying Lovers”—“endlessly twitching”…”as if they enjoy display”…the ostentatious disregard of

all things not themselves”.

I remember reading your first one 12 years ago and this one is an additional bonus!

26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

I'm so lucky to have you for a reader, Looocinda! ❤️

Jason McBride's avatar

I'm a big fan of drafting poems out in the wild! Right now, I'm working from a library. It has a lot of the same advantages of a cafe, lots of people not interested in talking to you, with the added bonus of book stacks you can wander when you need to pace around

26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Libraries rule! Short on coffee and bagels, however....

Jason McBride's avatar

True. That is a major shortcoming

shari young's avatar

An origin tale for the exclamation

“Get a room!”

Both very evocative of the cafe writing room!

Weston Parker's avatar

Good stuff, I liked them both.

26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Thanks, Weston - I'm glad!

Barbara Webb's avatar

café patios and coffee shops. So interesting, so comfortable and a wonderful place to get inspiration

26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

And a great place to hang out with friends, as well. As we know! :-)

Marlena Maduro Baraf's avatar

Wonderful! Am now heading out to my patio table on a sunny afternoon with my notebook in hand. I expect we will fall in love again (and again).

26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Perfect spot for a lovers' meeting, Marlena. I'm thinking of you at the patio table.

Rose Scarff's avatar

What you write is truly magic! I liked how both poems developed and I envy you the ability to write in such an atmosphere.

26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Thank you, Rose!

Some days a cafe atmosphere is more challenging than others, but when it's right, it's right.

Terri Grayum's avatar

Wonderful poems, again. New word for me: ensorcelled. Love it.

26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Such a useful word! I'm glad you like the poems, Terri.