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Caroline Mellor's avatar

This poem lives and breathes, full of spirit indeed 🍃💚

Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

What a beautiful Pentecost poem! I love the contrast in the opening lines between the dramatic wind, flames, dove, voices on the one hand and the ordinary grayness, softness, silence, smallness. It's kind of like Elijah's still small voice, but also reminds me of the Spirt coming "like the dewfall".

I love the effect of all the un- words: unseen, unsudden, unstopping, unsung, unsuddenly, unsudden... there's such a softness and restraint to them.

"ordinary and everywhere" is a delicious phrase and so is "ticking motes of clarity".

"whispering small wet love words to hard-packed earth

until it softens, charmed, and breathing out

its perfume like a sigh, surrenders to slow soaking,

drop by unending drop"

the delicate love-making between the rain and the earth!

and this: "a thousand scattered mirrors

doubling creation’s love and praises, over and over"

That's such a startling way to think about the reflective quality of water in puddles and drops.

This poem is as refreshing as a soft sudden shower.

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