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David Donoghue's avatar

"A nightlight rearranges

the shadows in the quiet room."

I barely got past this line and I wanted to just comment on how brilliant that image is, so powerful and effective at creating a sense of place and atmosphere...

.. but of course i had to read on and I am blown away by this story and how you tell it. Love speaks in so many ways and means.

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shari young's avatar

Soft and warm, quiet and radiant. Thank you for this tender poem.

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