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Rita Ott Ramstad's avatar

I think it works, too. You are 11, it was Appollo 11, and 11 is the age when everything takes off in "a measured perilous arc from fire/into the studied dark unknown."

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

It definitely works. I really like the rich, chaotic, tumbling journey of the ship with the girl trying to work her way through camp and illness and shyness and so many other things.

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