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Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

Beautiful haunting poems.

I love the crows and all the threes. It reminds me of the counting poem: One for Sorrow, Two for Joy. And also the Scots ballad: There were three ravens sat on a tree.

Lovely reversal: a woman being haunted by a house. It feels very much like a Robert Frost poem. The contrasts between warmth and cold, community and love vs isolation and loneliness.

"the warm curve of the hearth around its crumbling ash,"

"her ghost-self’s empty chill would sigh itself away"

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Elizabeth Beggins's avatar

I haven't yet figured out why you're reluctant to share newer "not fully vetted" pieces. They always seem wonderful to me. And who's to say you can't change them at will?

I want the ghost to find closure. And if I see three crows tomorrow, you'll be first to know!

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